Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Good Thunder Reading E.C.

           There were two readers that presented some of their writings on Thursday the 17th.
The first was Amanda Shumacher, a young woman in her third year of the MFA program at Mankato. She mainly writes young adult novels to short stories to personal essays. Her reading consisted of a section of one of her young adult novels. It was a scene with a girl named Josie laying in her room looking back on her mother's death and wondering when people will stop grieving for her pain and misery.
           This section of writing was very deep and emotioinal. The details of Josies thoughts were very vivid and painted a picture of what Josie was like. She lost her mother when she died due to a drunk driver. She herself had mostly gone past the stage of grieving of her mother, but there were friends who still reminded Josie of how bad the situation is and how they know how she feels, but she is critical and sees right through these people. She also developed a stealing habit, which suggests her reaching out for attention and something to take her mind off her mother.

           Also the well known fiction writer George Saunders. George Saunders has won many award for his unique style of writing in his short stories. Along with short stories he has also published children books and books of short essays. In the short fiction story titled "Victory Lap" he read in class he displayed his interesting stlye of writing. The story is written from three points of view and occasionally jumps from one of the character's view to the next. The characters are Allison a pretty young teenage girl who loves ballet and is slightly self obsessed. Next is Kyle, a tall skinny scrawny pale cross country kid who is a bit of a nerd due to the seclusion his parents make him live in. The last is the point of view of an middle-aged overall dumb man who turns out to be a kidnapper.
           Saunder's writing makes it seem like your literally in the head of the character and the character has schytzophrenia. There is not a detailed thought left out of the text on that particular character. At first it was a bit confusing but eventually the story picked up and the random bits of crude humor helped the story keep moving. The plot of the story is an intense heroic one that makes a listener feel good inside. After being inside the three characters heads for half an hour the action picks up when the man kidnapps Allison and takes her to his van to rape her. Kyle saw the whole thing and against his own will convinced himself to run out across the street and gash in the head of the kidnapper with a rock. This is a story of an underdog who prevailed and saved the pretty girl; its an old theme written in the unique style of George Saunders who put a modern twist on the underdog theme.

Monday, March 14, 2011

My Thesis for my Informative Paper

Thesis:
Increasing cases of Chronic Wasting Disease (CWD) have caused the sudden awareness of the issue's severity in the United States and in particular south-eastern Minnesota.

Intro:
  1. The detailed story of hundreds of elk infected with a particular severe are killed off in Zumbrota MN, people's reaction to why elk were killed, Importance of wiping out the elk farm.
  2. Thesis
  3. Short background info on CWD
  4. Relevance to the United States
  5. Relevance to SE MN
  6. Raise Question "Hoes this affect human beings?/ Why do we car?"
Supporting Ideas:
  •  Background Info
  1. Origin of Disease
  2. What it is
  3. Medical Quotes from professionals pertaining to severity of disease
  4. Specific severe cases, reason to worry
  • CWD relevance to the entire united states
  1. Specific nation-wide cases
  2. Written map of how it has spread from state to state
  3. National public opinion of disease compared to a Professionals opinion
  4. What we can expect in the next 5 years on a national level
  • CWD impact on local south-eastern Minnesota
  1. Block dialogue from local recent newspaper article
  2. The local people's opinions and arguments
  3. Why are the steps being taken to prevent the disease controversial
  4. Quotes from local professionals (DNR officer's, public officials)
  5. The future of SE Minnesota and CWD
  • How does the disease intervene with the human race
  1. Vivid details of disease in humans
  2. How this can happen
  3. What we have prepared if it does happen
Conclusion:
  • Tie The four supporting ideas together
  • explain the overall importance of the awareness of CWD
possible usable reference sites:
http://www.cwd-info.org/
http://www.cwd-info.org/index.php/fuseaction/about.map
http://www.aphis.usda.gov/animal_health/animal_diseases/cwd/
http://www.dnr.state.mn.us/mammals/deer/cwd/index.html
http://www.cdc.gov/ncidod/dvrd/cwd/
http://www.cdc.gov/ncidod/EID/vol10no6/03-1082.htm
http://www.mndeerhunters.com/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=16&Itemid=28
http://www.bah.state.mn.us/bah/releases/nr2011-01-21.html

    Basic structure of a paper

    Strong Introduction
    • hook the reader
    • Work as a road map for rest of the paper
    • Include an obvious thesis statement
    • Note: avoid listing supporting ideas that will become the topic sentences for your body paragraph.
    Body Paragraphs
    • Provide ideas that support the thesis in the form of of topic sentences
    • Provide cited ideas and facts-both quoted and paraphrased-from research materials
    • Provide accurate analysis and interpretation of the cited material, in your own words
    • make claims, provide examples, explain how those examples support your claims
    • Transition Sentences 
    Conclusion
    • Ties together the thesis and supporting ideas
    • Poses a final, conclusive statement/claim
    • Might include a quote that helps reiterate central themes/ideas
    • Might prose questions for further study
    • Note: avoid restating thesis and supporting ideas, no "in conclusion"